Feedback about our Treatment Pitch

Good feedback about our ideas:

*The audience felt that the contemporary dancing idea was a good thing and that it would make our video particularly different to others in today's music industry. 

*The audience also liked the fact that our video will be quite simple as apposed to something too complex and hard to understand. 

Things to be changed or considered:

* The black and white effect is too cliche. Maybe only use it as some points when it is really needed. Play with other effects that could go well with the video to make it a bit more different to the typical heartbreaking videos there are in the music industry. However, we wanted to challenge this criticism as we still thought it would be appropriate to use the black and white effect in our music video. If this is not successful, we can always look at other effects that may appeal to the video. 

*We asked the audience what they thought about having some bath scenes where the female singer will be in the bath to show her vulnerability and insecurity. The audience suggested that it is very much like in Rihanna's video of Stay but that we could do it our own way so that it is different. Moreover, Stay's music video is all based being in the bath compared to our video which will only happen at some points not all the way. 

*Some suggested that we should show in the video, the ways or times in which the male she is singing about, makes her feel insecure so that it would fit in better with the lyrics and what message it is trying to put across.